Monday, September 29, 2008

Wiriting a poem in five minutes (Tell me what you think!)

Standing out, looking in
Wishing to be in that wonderland they're in
They are so loved
And I am so unloved
They're as pretty as the the stars
All I have are scars
Everyone wants to be them
Who wouldn't? They are gems
They have it all, everything
And I have Nothing
I write this poem in vain
To try and explain this pain
But I can't
And I shan't
For I can't change who I am

1 comment:

Sam:) said...

VERY nice!
I like it.
Who ya talkin bout?