Wednesday, February 17, 2010

White-blue cascade

Water falls
Not in a stream
In a gush
White cascades whisp
Over my frail body
I hold my hands up
To surrender
But still the
Waterfall falls.

1 comment:

Brii333 said...

Holy mother of crap, I have no constructive criticism for this one. I really like the "White cascades whisp Over my frail body" part. It's uuuuuuber pretty.